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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Alone

    What? Good? This? No. It's typical teenage angst poetry. "Chameleon", "Mask", "Cannot be found", "Withdraw", OH, so these are the lines where you talk about how unique it is for ...

    Sep 7, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Spectrum of Adulation

    Spectrum of Adulation Red. Terrible opening. What's so interesting about red? It's a color, sure, we all know what it looks like, so why should I continue reading. Poetry has ...

    Sep 7, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Message at Funeral

    Elinor, despondency is, in fact, a word that I would expect anyone with a bit of education to understand. de·spon·den·cy (d-spndn-s) n. Depression of spirits from loss of hope, confidence, ...

    Sep 7, 2009


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